So here is the process that I went through when writing it:
1. Read books around my topic
2. Watch online lectures from the LSE website to supplement knowledge or even better actually attend a lecture.
3. Make a list of all the reasons why you want to do this course and the proof that you have to show that you love it - work experience, debates that you have had , exhibitions that you have gone to ect...
4. Write a opening paragraph - no cliches , no sayings by Gandhi , none of that !It's important to state why you like the subject in one sentence and the topics on your course that you are most looking forward to studying.
5. The 2nd paragraph - get into a topic that you are very interested about - be specific and talk more about you - link the books that you have read to your topic that you are talking about in your paragraph and the lectures you attended ect.., This is where you can show how passionate you are academically.
6. Next step is talking about any work experience - what you learnt and how it links in to your future job that you want to do.
7. A paragraph on the activities that you do such as sports or any type of stuff you are interested in outside of school such as art , photography , travelling , theatre .
8 . Then add a concluding sentence- something that they will remember.
General tips:
- Use the thesaurus sparingly , you don't want to be using words that you don't understand and then you get asked to go to an interview and your speaking the lingo of a 12 year old instead.
- GRAMMER , CHECK YOUR GRAMMER
- No cliche sayings
- Don't say that you liked the subject since you were young , because it is clear that you probably didn't as not 9 year old was interested in anthropology or history.
- Talk about your transferable skills
- Talk about positions of responsibility, Duke of Edinburgh award , projects that went well ...
- Show that you are a critical thinker - if you have done an EPQ write about it .
- Don't ramble , structure your points
So yeah that was pretty much the process that I went though and the tips that I was given. I hope you found them useful. Please feel free to message me if you want me to proofread your personal statement I would be more than happy to have a look at it for you.
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