So I wrote a little something to express how I'm feeling . Sorry if it's crappy , it's the first time I've ever written anything like this and sorry if it's depressing.
Black, Blue, purple, Yellow, Black, Blue, Silver,
Oh Silver and gold are prime to your character
Green in your eyes, black in your heart, grey all around
Clogged like your brain
Fresh turned to stale,
Maybe love is what you need
Maybe anger needs to be freed
Maybe forgiveness needs to proceed and succeed
Because the problem is I don’t know how much longer I can
keep up to this beat.
Beat my spirit since day once
I aint even looking for love
I got issues too
But somehow you’re the only one that’s allowed to be excused.
Lovely, I like it - very cleverly expressed
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Julie :)
ReplyDeleteLove this Mina! It's so creative and beautifully written, I especially like the last verse.
ReplyDeleteRida X
Thanks Rids ! It was a in the moment kinda thing xx
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